So, this is long overdue. We sold our house and moved right at the end of August and the whole month of September was a total wash. It's hilarious to me that this chapter (a long one) starts in the month I failed to post a single thing. Here you go, the latest installment of … Continue reading Chapter 23
CHAPTER Twenty-Two
Better late than never? Here's the next installment of The Davies. CHAPTER 22 Faith arrived for her weekend stay and was immediately accepted into the fold by the Aunties. The first night of her stay Kate went all out with dinner and then Beth entertained them all with stories of her travels through Italy and … Continue reading CHAPTER Twenty-Two
Chapter Twenty-One
Hi folks! Another late installment. Sorry! Life has been complicated again. This time it involved having to get a rabies shot. lol. A story for another time. For this installment of The Davies, read on. When Kennedy got to work the morning after the board meeting, Mrs. Hughes was in high spirits. As expected Caldwell … Continue reading Chapter Twenty-One
Chapter Twenty
It took a few days, but Will finally resurfaced and took Kennedy to spend a Saturday at the beach near Owen’s house. They swam for a while then laid out blankets on the sand. The sun’s rays and the steady crash of the waves created a kind of bubble around her, keeping the world out … Continue reading Chapter Twenty
Chapter Nineteen
We're back with a new chapter in the Davies series. Sorry for the delay. Life got complicated again. This is a short one so I'll try to get the next one up a little quicker. Thanks for reading! Kennedy woke with a start. She was breathing heavily and from the wetness on her cheeks she … Continue reading Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Eighteen
Howdy Readers! Here's the next installment of The Davies. Will showed up at Parker House out of the blue the next afternoon. Kennedy was out in the back yard laying on a deck chair with her face to the sun. She loved to sit there in the afternoons after work although she was too fair … Continue reading Chapter Eighteen
Chapter 17
This chapter picks up as Owen and Kennedy are driving back to Parker House. It's sort of the second half of the same scene. Together, these chapters are too long so I broke them up. Happy reading! The drive was short, and Owen quickly pulled into the driveway at Parker House. He drove up to … Continue reading Chapter 17
Chapter Sixteen
The next installment of The Davies is here. If you need to catch up with previous chapters, you can hit the link to the blog. The next day Kennedy rode her bike out to Elm Street and hiked back through the woods to the rickety bridge. She held her breath while crossing and said a … Continue reading Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Fifteen
Sorry for the late installment of The Davies. Life got in the way. I'll try to post the next chapter soon. When Kennedy arrived for work the next morning, Mrs. Hughes was in a mood. Since Kennedy wasn’t feeling rainbows and sunshine herself, the vibes were decidedly off. She was still pissed at Will for … Continue reading Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Fourteen
This is the next installment in The Davies. We're in Owen's POV for this one. It's the second half of the scene in Chapter Thirteen. Owen pulled his arm out from under Renee and spun to face her as Kennedy took off. “What the hell was that about?” “Penance Owen, it’s only just begun.” … Continue reading Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Thirteen
Sorry for the delay! Last week was crazy-busy so no new chapter. This week I had the time to edit so here you go. This is chapter 13 of the Davies. This one starts with a bit of telling instead of showing. It needed to condense boring weeks of normality down to a few paragraphs … Continue reading Chapter Thirteen
Chapter 12
Today I have a tiny chapter for you. I was tempted to combine it with another, but it's a perfect gem on it's own. It's also the first time the two main character see each other. So, I decided to leave it as is. It's the first time we have two viewpoints in the same … Continue reading Chapter 12
Chapter 10 and 11
Today we have two chapters instead of the usual one. Chapter 10 is small, probably not worth a whole chapter so I'm including 11 as well. Owen landed on his back as Will grabbed the ball, jumped over him, and continued down the court to score. A simple game of community men’s team basketball at … Continue reading Chapter 10 and 11
Chapter Nine
Chapter Nine of The Davies. I struggled with this one. I wanted to edit the life out of it, but I've left it as is. More to come. Every home has its rhythms, and Kennedy was beginning to understand those of Parker house and its occupants. The first rule of the day seemed to be … Continue reading Chapter Nine
Chapter Eight
Chapter eight in The Davies serialized novel. More new characters are introduced. I'll have a blog post soon about the mistakes I'm seeing I made when initially writing this book. It's been a trip! Owen had spent the entire day crouching over spreadsheets and bank statements and now he was paying for it. No ergonomic … Continue reading Chapter Eight
Chapter Seven
Chapter Seven in the serialized novel The Davies. On Sunday, Kate and Beth acted like going to church was not optional so Kennedy got up, dressed and joined them on the walk into town. On the way, Beth explained the history of Coventry Parish and gave her a running commentary on the people she’d meet. … Continue reading Chapter Seven
Chapter Six
If you need to catch up, click here for the explainer and the earlier chapters. Owen’s phone rang in his pocket, and he dug through his jacket, pulling it out to check who it was before hitting the reject button sending it to voicemail. Not taking that. He put the phone away. She would get … Continue reading Chapter Six
Chapter Five
Note: Chapter five is actually two chapters in one. I know I said I would only lightly edit, but boy.... Basically I hit one of the reasons I shelved this novel. The two chapters were long and chock full of description that didn't advance the plot one single bit. It was boring. Like, seriously boring. … Continue reading Chapter Five
The Davies: Chapter Four
The story continues. You can find the start of the story here: Chapter Four “Folks… Folks seriously shut up.” The man at podium shouted and the crowd laughed before slowly growing quiet. He straightened his suit coat, smoothed back his short, gray hair and spoke into the mic again. “I swear you get louder as … Continue reading The Davies: Chapter Four
The Davies: Chapter Three
Chapter three is here. If you missed the start, you can find all parts on this blog. This is a novel I shelved years ago and decided to resurrect, lightly edit, and publish (warts and all) as a series. I'd love for you to follow along. And if you'd like to contribute, I've got a … Continue reading The Davies: Chapter Three
The Davies: Chapter Two
This week's installment is where we meet our second point of view. It's a short one. If you've been following along from the start you know that this is a novel I shelved years ago and I promised in uploading it as a series I'd only edit it lightly, essentially leaving it as-is. What I … Continue reading The Davies: Chapter Two
Tips for the Writer in Interesting Times
Taking a break this week from posting a new chapter of the Davies (no worries, I plan to post it soon) to get some thoughts down for myself and maybe for fellow creatives who are in the same mood. It's tough writing my little WIP or editing on other content when it seems like the … Continue reading Tips for the Writer in Interesting Times
The Davies: Chapter One
Kennedy Davies sat in the first seat of the row of white plastic chairs along the back wall of Wash ‘N’ Fold scrolling aimlessly on her phone. Burning an hour and a half in a laundromat under the fluorescent lights in the bleach and dryer-sheet scented air was not a fun time, but after the … Continue reading The Davies: Chapter One
Introducing The Davies – A Serialized Novel
Back in 2010 I started writing my very first book. I revised it a few times, tried to get an agent with it and got nowhere. Out of frustration, I shelved it. A few months later, the idea for The Broken Trail came to me and I got to work on what would be my … Continue reading Introducing The Davies – A Serialized Novel
2024 – Loss and Hope
It's New Year's Eve and I have a stomach bug so the festivities are off. I was poking about on the internet and reminded that I blogged exactly 0 times this month. Not okay. I want 2024 to be the year I managed to post all 12 months. This year was a doozy. I feel … Continue reading 2024 – Loss and Hope
Guest Blog, a Turkey Chili Recipe, and a Giveaway
Check out my guest post at Inkslinger with a Turkey Chili Recipe (It's so good) and signed book giveaway. I know the Texans will take one look and let me know that this is not real chili, but I can promise it's good!
October
Autumn has come to New England and as Anne Shirley said, "I'm so glad I live in a world where there are Octobers." But I have a slight caveat. Both my youngest child and myself are facing some medical issues that require big, ol' invasive tests. His appointment is next week, mine the week after. … Continue reading October
Tense Times
I've been reading Stephen King's "On Writing" and I'm more than halfway through. It's giving me ideas. One idea I've been having is down-right ill-advised. Or I’m assuming it is. 42,000 words into this novel I’m seriously considering changing the tense. I have never written in 1st person. In fact, I usually hate it as … Continue reading Tense Times
Good Intentions
What is that quote about good intentions? Well, the less said, the better. I went into my July vacation with the very best of intentions. I was going to write 1k words a day and they would be wonderful. Did that happen? Heck, no. But I did read two books, spent time in the sun, … Continue reading Good Intentions
Love is Always Worth The Price
The time it's hardest to write is when your heart is broken. Not sad, notdown, broken. The idea that heavy emotions are good for writing is ridiculouslywrong. It's only helpful when you finally crawl out of the pit and can reflect.When the pain hits, you're curled into a ball, trying to survive. It's not thetime … Continue reading Love is Always Worth The Price
Maybe I Need a Deadline
Fellow parents will back me up on this, the end of the school year is the ultimate test of both your stamina and time management. So many tasks, performances and deadlines that we long for June with all our might. It's all rush, rush, rush to the last day. The last few weeks I've been … Continue reading Maybe I Need a Deadline
Tools for writing
I thought I'd use this week's blog to recommend some of the tips, tricks, and aids I use in writing. I'm not talking about development edits etc. Those you gotta shell out some serious cash for. Instead, these are accessible, easy ways to boost your ability to get thoughts out of your head and into … Continue reading Tools for writing
Words on the Page
I decided to stop counting the weeks. I've managed to do better than my original goal of blogging at least monthly. It seems the object of that project is achieved, I now spend time writing daily. Even if it's hard, unproductive or a bit demoralizing, I still sit at the keyboard every night with my … Continue reading Words on the Page
Week ? Oops.
So, you may have noticed that there was no post last week. I let my anxiety get the better of me and I had an entirely unproductive week outside of my day job. My house didn’t get clean, I wrote maybe 1k words, I focused all my energy on getting the necessary stuff done and … Continue reading Week ? Oops.
Week Twelve: Tools of the Trade
The book is up to 35k. It's a stat that's easy to see when working in MS Word, it's right there at the bottom of the page. But I'm writing this book in Scrivener where you have to select an option and wait for a few seconds while it gets you the total. I don't … Continue reading Week Twelve: Tools of the Trade
Week Eleven: The Way Forward
The book is up to 31k words. Phew. Last week was rough so this week I focused on cutting a scene I knew wasn't working and starting over with a new point of view. Sometimes a scene is a mess because I'm writing from the wrong person's head. Switching POV changes the voice and can … Continue reading Week Eleven: The Way Forward
Week Ten: It Is What It Is
I added net 0 words this past week. I edited so much that my word count didn't increase. I'm not sure they were even necessary edits. This isn't really writing, it's more fussing with the text than anything else. It's procrasti-writing: going back over what I've already finished and cleaning it up when I have … Continue reading Week Ten: It Is What It Is
Week Nine: One Step in Front of the Other
I made it to 28k this week which is not bad, but it's not great either. My writing sessions are still productive, but it's harder work. I've been here before. We're in the middle bit now where things start slowing down and you have to push harder to get the words on the page. I'm … Continue reading Week Nine: One Step in Front of the Other
Week Eight: 25k
I have nothing witty to say, but I did get to 25k words. So there's that. Short post since my brain is fried. Life is...complex right now. Lots of difficulty for friends and family and trying to find the balance between helping and maintaining my peace is getting hard. Good thing I have a God … Continue reading Week Eight: 25k
Week Seven: In The Weeds
I added a grand total of 2k words this week to my work in progress. Not great. I sat down about every night as usual, but ended up scrolling social media or staring at my Pinterest pages hoping for the ideas to flow. The only times they were flowing this week were when I was … Continue reading Week Seven: In The Weeds
WEEK SIX: Brewing up 18K
5 K words in one week is not bad. And they're words I liked. I had to stop tonight to write this blog, but lately the flow has been flowing. I don't want to jinx it, but it's going well. At least writing has been going well. Life overall is as complicated as always. The … Continue reading WEEK SIX: Brewing up 18K
Week Five: 13k Words
The words continue to flow and this week I reached 13,000 in my work in progress. I was shocked when I saw the count because it didn’t feel like it at all. I think that’s because this time, I’m not fighting for every sentence. I finally know my characters well enough to write their scenes … Continue reading Week Five: 13k Words
Week Four: Vitamin P
At Christmas I got Covid followed by Paxlovid rebound. Round two was rough.And then came tonsillitis as in my doctor's words "with tonsils like yoursit's sort of expected" which meant a round of antibiotics and finally,Prednisone to clear up the laryngitis all that left me with. Winter reallyneeds to be over. I'm wearing a mask … Continue reading Week Four: Vitamin P
Week Three: Breakthrough
For a while I’ve been struggling with my female main character. I didn’t ‘get’ her. That sounds kind of nutty since I made her up, but in the past, I’ve had characters come to me fully formed or from a previous book, so it was easy. This time, I was making her up out of … Continue reading Week Three: Breakthrough
Week Two: It’s a hard slog.
Taika Waititi once said of screenwriting “Sometimes writing is opening up your laptop, looking at a blank page on Final Draft for about 8 hours, and then feeling sad, and then closing it. That’s still classified as writing.” And that’s a pretty accurate statement on my current efforts. I sit at the keyboard, stare at … Continue reading Week Two: It’s a hard slog.
Week One: Forming a Habit
I made it a goal to write more consistently this year and here's the update on how it's going. Week one is in the can. Here's how it went: Discipline is training yourself to do something and a habit is when a behavior becomes routine and automatic. A task formed through discipline that becomes a … Continue reading Week One: Forming a Habit
2024: Goals
I’m not one for New year’s resolutions, but I do love setting goals. For 2024 my goals are to eat right, exercise, and finally finish my book. I’ve been working on this for years. After my last book, I took a break to focus on my family and day job, but when I started to … Continue reading 2024: Goals
Mercy and Grace
most of us understand that this world is not a safe place. That was a hard lesson for me. But in it, I also learned that forgiveness frees, love is an action verb, and mercy and grace, when applied liberally, will save relationships. Hate builds nothing, it only consumes you.
Grief Is a Bottomless Well
It has been six months since my daughter’s death due to a catastrophic brain hemorrhage. It has taken almost that long to get the coroner’s report and official cause of death which is complications from a rare kind of stroke caused by a blood clot. Next week we’ll be meeting with the team of doctors … Continue reading Grief Is a Bottomless Well
Grief Is An Angry Ocean
After losing a child, grief comes in waves, sometimes overwhelming.