CHAPTER Twenty-Two

Better late than never? Here's the next installment of The Davies. CHAPTER 22 Faith arrived for her weekend stay and was immediately accepted into the fold by the Aunties. The first night of her stay Kate went all out with dinner and then Beth entertained them all with stories of her travels through Italy and … Continue reading CHAPTER Twenty-Two

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Chapter Twenty-One

Hi folks! Another late installment. Sorry! Life has been complicated again. This time it involved having to get a rabies shot. lol. A story for another time. For this installment of The Davies, read on. When Kennedy got to work the morning after the board meeting, Mrs. Hughes was in high spirits. As expected Caldwell … Continue reading Chapter Twenty-One

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Chapter Fifteen

Sorry for the late installment of The Davies. Life got in the way. I'll try to post the next chapter soon. When Kennedy arrived for work the next morning, Mrs. Hughes was in a mood. Since Kennedy wasn’t feeling rainbows and sunshine herself, the vibes were decidedly off. She was still pissed at Will for … Continue reading Chapter Fifteen

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Chapter Fourteen

This is the next installment in The Davies. We're in Owen's POV for this one. It's the second half of the scene in Chapter Thirteen. Owen pulled his arm out from under Renee and spun to face her as Kennedy took off. “What the hell was that about?”             “Penance Owen, it’s only just begun.” … Continue reading Chapter Fourteen

Chapter 10 and 11

Today we have two chapters instead of the usual one. Chapter 10 is small, probably not worth a whole chapter so I'm including 11 as well. Owen landed on his back as Will grabbed the ball, jumped over him, and continued down the court to score. A simple game of community men’s team basketball at … Continue reading Chapter 10 and 11

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Chapter Eight

Chapter eight in The Davies serialized novel. More new characters are introduced. I'll have a blog post soon about the mistakes I'm seeing I made when initially writing this book. It's been a trip! Owen had spent the entire day crouching over spreadsheets and bank statements and now he was paying for it. No ergonomic … Continue reading Chapter Eight

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Chapter Seven

Chapter Seven in the serialized novel The Davies. On Sunday, Kate and Beth acted like going to church was not optional so Kennedy got up, dressed and joined them on the walk into town. On the way, Beth explained the history of Coventry Parish and gave her a running commentary on the people she’d meet. … Continue reading Chapter Seven

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Chapter Five

Note: Chapter five is actually two chapters in one. I know I said I would only lightly edit, but boy.... Basically I hit one of the reasons I shelved this novel. The two chapters were long and chock full of description that didn't advance the plot one single bit. It was boring. Like, seriously boring. … Continue reading Chapter Five

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The Davies: Chapter Four

The story continues. You can find the start of the story here: Chapter Four “Folks… Folks seriously shut up.” The man at podium shouted and the crowd laughed before slowly growing quiet. He straightened his suit coat, smoothed back his short, gray hair and spoke into the mic again. “I swear you get louder as … Continue reading The Davies: Chapter Four

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The Davies: Chapter Three

Chapter three is here. If you missed the start, you can find all parts on this blog. This is a novel I shelved years ago and decided to resurrect, lightly edit, and publish (warts and all) as a series. I'd love for you to follow along. And if you'd like to contribute, I've got a … Continue reading The Davies: Chapter Three

The Davies: Chapter Two

This week's installment is where we meet our second point of view. It's a short one. If you've been following along from the start you know that this is a novel I shelved years ago and I promised in uploading it as a series I'd only edit it lightly, essentially leaving it as-is. What I … Continue reading The Davies: Chapter Two

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Tips for the Writer in Interesting Times

Taking a break this week from posting a new chapter of the Davies (no worries, I plan to post it soon) to get some thoughts down for myself and maybe for fellow creatives who are in the same mood. It's tough writing my little WIP or editing on other content when it seems like the … Continue reading Tips for the Writer in Interesting Times

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The Davies: Chapter One

Kennedy Davies sat in the first seat of the row of white plastic chairs along the back wall of Wash ‘N’ Fold scrolling aimlessly on her phone. Burning an hour and a half in a laundromat under the fluorescent lights in the bleach and dryer-sheet scented air was not a fun time, but after the … Continue reading The Davies: Chapter One

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Introducing The Davies – A Serialized Novel

Back in 2010 I started writing my very first book. I revised it a few times, tried to get an agent with it and got nowhere. Out of frustration, I shelved it. A few months later, the idea for The Broken Trail came to me and I got to work on what would be my … Continue reading Introducing The Davies – A Serialized Novel

Tense Times

I've been reading Stephen King's "On Writing" and I'm more than halfway through. It's giving me ideas. One idea I've been having is down-right ill-advised. Or I’m assuming it is. 42,000 words into this novel I’m seriously considering changing the tense. I have never written in 1st person. In fact, I usually hate it as … Continue reading Tense Times

Love is Always Worth The Price

The time it's hardest to write is when your heart is broken. Not sad, notdown, broken. The idea that heavy emotions are good for writing is ridiculouslywrong. It's only helpful when you finally crawl out of the pit and can reflect.When the pain hits, you're curled into a ball, trying to survive. It's not thetime … Continue reading Love is Always Worth The Price

Maybe I Need a Deadline

Fellow parents will back me up on this, the end of the school year is the ultimate test of both your stamina and time management. So many tasks, performances and deadlines that we long for June with all our might. It's all rush, rush, rush to the last day. The last few weeks I've been … Continue reading Maybe I Need a Deadline

Tools for writing

I thought I'd use this week's blog to recommend some of the tips, tricks, and aids I use in writing. I'm not talking about development edits etc. Those you gotta shell out some serious cash for. Instead, these are accessible, easy ways to boost your ability to get thoughts out of your head and into … Continue reading Tools for writing

Words on the Page

I decided to stop counting the weeks. I've managed to do better than my original goal of blogging at least monthly. It seems the object of that project is achieved, I now spend time writing daily. Even if it's hard, unproductive or a bit demoralizing, I still sit at the keyboard every night with my … Continue reading Words on the Page

Week Twelve: Tools of the Trade

The book is up to 35k. It's a stat that's easy to see when working in MS Word, it's right there at the bottom of the page. But I'm writing this book in Scrivener where you have to select an option and wait for a few seconds while it gets you the total. I don't … Continue reading Week Twelve: Tools of the Trade

Week Eleven: The Way Forward

The book is up to 31k words. Phew. Last week was rough so this week I focused on cutting a scene I knew wasn't working and starting over with a new point of view. Sometimes a scene is a mess because I'm writing from the wrong person's head. Switching POV changes the voice and can … Continue reading Week Eleven: The Way Forward

Week Ten: It Is What It Is

I added net 0 words this past week. I edited so much that my word count didn't increase. I'm not sure they were even necessary edits. This isn't really writing, it's more fussing with the text than anything else. It's procrasti-writing: going back over what I've already finished and cleaning it up when I have … Continue reading Week Ten: It Is What It Is

Week Nine: One Step in Front of the Other

I made it to 28k this week which is not bad, but it's not great either. My writing sessions are still productive, but it's harder work. I've been here before. We're in the middle bit now where things start slowing down and you have to push harder to get the words on the page. I'm … Continue reading Week Nine: One Step in Front of the Other

Week Eight: 25k

I have nothing witty to say, but I did get to 25k words. So there's that. Short post since my brain is fried. Life is...complex right now. Lots of difficulty for friends and family and trying to find the balance between helping and maintaining my peace is getting hard. Good thing I have a God … Continue reading Week Eight: 25k

Week Seven: In The Weeds

I added a grand total of 2k words this week to my work in progress. Not great. I sat down about every night as usual, but ended up scrolling social media or staring at my Pinterest pages hoping for the ideas to flow. The only times they were flowing this week were when I was … Continue reading Week Seven: In The Weeds

Week Five: 13k Words

The words continue to flow and this week I reached 13,000 in my work in progress. I was shocked when I saw the count because it didn’t feel like it at all. I think that’s because this time, I’m not fighting for every sentence. I finally know my characters well enough to write their scenes … Continue reading Week Five: 13k Words

Week Four: Vitamin P

At Christmas I got Covid followed by Paxlovid rebound. Round two was rough.And then came tonsillitis as in my doctor's words "with tonsils like yoursit's sort of expected" which meant a round of antibiotics and finally,Prednisone to clear up the laryngitis all that left me with. Winter reallyneeds to be over. I'm wearing a mask … Continue reading Week Four: Vitamin P

Week Three: Breakthrough

For a while I’ve been struggling with my female main character. I didn’t ‘get’ her. That sounds kind of nutty since I made her up, but in the past, I’ve had characters come to me fully formed or from a previous book, so it was easy. This time, I was making her up out of … Continue reading Week Three: Breakthrough

Week Two: It’s a hard slog.

Taika Waititi once said of screenwriting “Sometimes writing is opening up your laptop, looking at a blank page on Final Draft for about 8 hours, and then feeling sad, and then closing it. That’s still classified as writing.” And that’s a pretty accurate statement on my current efforts. I sit at the keyboard, stare at … Continue reading Week Two: It’s a hard slog.

Week One: Forming a Habit

I made it a goal to write more consistently this year and here's the update on how it's going. Week one is in the can. Here's how it went: Discipline is training yourself to do something and a habit is when a behavior becomes routine and automatic.  A task formed through discipline that becomes a … Continue reading Week One: Forming a Habit

Grief Is a Bottomless Well

It has been six months since my daughter’s death due to a catastrophic brain hemorrhage. It has taken almost that long to get the coroner’s report and official cause of death which is complications from a rare kind of stroke caused by a blood clot. Next week we’ll be meeting with the team of doctors … Continue reading Grief Is a Bottomless Well